In a small garden pond

In a small garden pond

Carp stay still on the bottom

Seen through the thin ice


About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of "Haiku Poems" and "Haiku Poems II" ( Old resident of Tokyo.
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7 Responses to In a small garden pond

  1. Lovely. I don’t know why that skim of ice should be so attractive, but it is.

  2. Heartafire says:

    such lovely haiku, a wonderful tour through the blue garden this morning! Thank you!

    • AshiAkira says:

      I thank you! I’m always pleased when I know someone visited the blue garden to red about the two pilots who dedicated their lives for us.

      • Heartafire says:

        it’s a lovely tribute you have established for them!

      • AshiAkira says:

        Thank you for a kind comment. Sorry I couldn’t respond to such an encouraging remark from soon enough, but I found this particular message (and another one) from you in the spam file today. I can’t figure out why this happened and honestly don’t know what to do about it.

  3. Aliosa says:

    EMINESCU, poet universal ! 🙂


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