Snow’s gone lilacs were coming.
I was stunned when lilac blossoms bloomed.
I’d never known there was such a dreamy scent in that land.
I was then a young foreign student there.
The lilac blossoms were gone, then raspberries ripened.
I first saw her in a raspberry bush by the meadow.
She was walking slowly in the bush.
Her face under a wide-brimmed hat was focused on the berries to pick.
She came and extended to me her palms holding the berries.
“Edible?” I asked and she nodded yes.
I tasted the sour sweet while she watched me with her large eyes with full attention.
That moment I felt as if I was being born again.
Till then, I’d never seen a western girl except on the Hollywood silver screen.
Such a girl was way beyond the walls and fences.
It was a dream that came true that I was talking with such a girl in person.
Not only her, she had lots of friends, and they all became my friends, too.
It was only some years after the war’s end that I went to that land.
Many of my high school seniors had been trained to kill the people.
To kill my would-be good friends, and they themselves died in action.
Had not the war ended in time, I would have been trained to kill them, too.
The war’s end removed at least the wall and fence that existed there then.
The flows of people to each other’s side began.
Peace came in our part or the world, bringing better lives and happiness.
Why new walls and fences then?
Walls and fences exist here and there all over the world today.
People feel insecure unless they secure their domains with walls and fences.
But the fact is that walled and fenced domains guarantee no security.
Political leaders’ job is to remove the existing walls and fences.
But the leaders work in the opposite way.
Our government has just issued an order to our self-defense members overseas.
They were ordered to run to help in case third friendly countries’ posts are attacked.
They are now allowed to use their weapons if necessary in such a mission.
Peace and prosperity come when all the walls and fences are gone.
Walls and fences must be gone for the happiness of us all.
What must be done should be done.
What should be done can be done.
You’re so right, Ashi. Political leaders’ job is to remove the existing walls and fences. But they want to build them back, unfortunately. 😦
Yes, no walls and fences mean freedom. But I am not sure that they want this for us. If they want freedom for us…
Thank you for reading the story poem. I’m glad you think so, too. 🙂
There is no other way to think
Right. ❤ 🙂
That was extremely heartfelt!
Thank you for reading it.
Powerful. Persuasive. Tragic, still very hopeful.
Its beautiful Mr Ashiaki. There are people like you with your heart without walls and fances and there are those people who say they sudn allow walls and fances but are working with every fibre of their muscle to create one..wat world are we heading to??
Like fallen leaves on a stream of water we flow.
All streams to rivers, all rivers to the sea we go.
There will be a big enough body of water in the sea
That all of us will be free. 🙂
Very well said. At the end we will all be one thing one spirit of universe… 🙂
Yes. There you will be together with that phantom person of yours if you like. 🙂
Hmmm… i wil be there and so wil you..and so will everyone we love will be 🙂
Yes, all of them who have gone through the streams and rivers. 🙂
Provided, of course, that the phantom person is in existence. Wait a minute… phantom is nonexistence by definition… it’s only in your mind…
Uh hmmm..i hav realized phantom is non exsistent..and it was alys only in my mind. But it was a good dream 🙂
It must be a good dream. I understand. Enjoy being with him as much as possible while you can. I’m curious what kind of phantom he is though. So keep on writing about “him”. 🙂
I wil send you..i wrote so many..that was only one. There 2o pages actually Mr Ashiaki 🙂
20 pages. Perhaps you better send them to me through email. I have difficulty reading in photo pages. I need reading glasses, you know.
Sure. Is your email the one u gave me in twitter? I will try copy pasting to you..coz taht site is kinda hard to send 🙂
Yes, that’s the one. 🙂
I will 🙂 although i will hav to type again 🙂
Please don’t bother to spend too much time for it. We might find a better way later. 🙂
Thats alright. i tried opening wattpad on laptop it still didnt work. i will write em on my laptop tomorow and send u some 🙂 i actualy wrote it on a celph and uploaded it from there. 🙂
Great! 🙂 But do remember I want you to do your more important things first. 🙂
Hmmm certainly Mr Ashiaki. It won be much hassle don wry. i sit al day at library or home. Nothing to do except working for exams..it wil take my mind off 🙂
As you like it. 🙂
Beautiful, my friend….
Thank you, Gigoid. I don’t know why but I found your comment in my spam folder today.
It probably didn’t expect to see me using Japanese to respond…. I’ll stick to English… 🙂
Thank you for such a powerful writing! I agree…wholeheartedly. Walls, wherever they may be, are never the answer!
Thank you for reading the story. Means a lot to me.
deep thoughts you have got here. Thanks Ashi for reminding us how stupid walls are !
Thank you for reading the story. 🙂