Long slow slope upward

Used to enjoy jogging here

Now flowers alongside


About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of "Haiku Poems" and "Haiku Poems II" (www.lulu.com/shop/ashiakira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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6 Responses to

  1. delphini510 says:

    😊 Now, by walking instead you see the flowers that always grew alongside.
    Miriam πŸŒΌπŸ¦‹

  2. Ivana says:

    Jogging upslope sounds intense!

  3. Lovely balance with the heavy beats in the first line, the staccato movement in the second and then final charm in the last line.

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