Early summer night

Early summer night

Breeze through lush foliage sways curtain

Brings the scent of youth

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of "Haiku Poems" and "Haiku Poems II" (www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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23 Responses to Early summer night

  1. loshame says:

    I like that 😊

  2. dornahainds says:

    Charming! 🌹🌹🌹

  3. Heartafire says:

    Such a lovely image Ashi…makes the heart sing!

  4. … the scent of youth, that’s the most powerful part as you tie it up with the tranquility of a summer night. Excellent!

  5. Lovely leap in the last line. (This is my last online comment for a while!)

  6. eliza rudolf says:


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