Spring sun brings out people

Spring sun brings out people

The park yard like crowded train

Flowers on path frightened

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of "Haiku Poems" and "Haiku Poems II" (www.lulu.com/shop/ashiakira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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10 Responses to Spring sun brings out people

  1. this one is so lovely. i can see the flowers, being frightened.
    i walk beside them quietly, just whispering. thank you for this lovely poem.

  2. weggieboy says:

    Yes, those flowers should shiver in fear of someone – or many someones! – wanting a fresh blossom to put in their hair or the buttonhole of their suit!

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