Spring sun brings out people

Spring sun brings out people

The park yard like crowded train

Flowers on path frightened


About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems (www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo. 葦享(あしあきら)、著書(1)「伊奈葉くんアメリカを見る」、(2)「伊奈葉さん日本を憂う」(中央公論事業出版)
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10 Responses to Spring sun brings out people

  1. this one is so lovely. i can see the flowers, being frightened.
    i walk beside them quietly, just whispering. thank you for this lovely poem.

  2. weggieboy says:

    Yes, those flowers should shiver in fear of someone – or many someones! – wanting a fresh blossom to put in their hair or the buttonhole of their suit!

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