On wintry evening

Posted on January 25, 2017 by

On wintry evening

Warm tea in cup in cupped hands

Frost on the window

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems and Haiku Poems II(www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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11 Responses to On wintry evening

  2. hilarycustancegreen says:
    January 26, 2017 at 7:01 am

    Yes. Lovely and I like the repetition ‘cup’ and ‘cupped hands’.

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  3. dornahainds says:
    January 27, 2017 at 9:56 am

    Such a sweet-serene experience.

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  4. mopana says:
    January 28, 2017 at 2:42 am

    Warm inside, frost outside 🙂
    Awesome, Ashi 🙂
    Mo-hugs and kisses ❤

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  5. Mark Armstrong says:
    January 29, 2017 at 11:58 am

    How beautiful– both the image and the attendant feeling. And it fills me with gratitude for the simple pleasures of life, and just being alive.

    I’m smiling because your lovely haiku also conjures up an image of me on winter mornings: darkness, stillness, hands cupped around a hot cup of coffee, and my stocking feet (well, my toes) pressed lightly against the glassed door of the woodstove, which is still warm from the night’s fire. Contentment… but I can’t express it as concisely and poetically as you, sir! : )

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