Tall grass windless still

Tall grass windless still

Sparrows trying to perch on

Blades weak unfriendly

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of "Haiku Poems" and "Haiku Poems II" (www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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9 Responses to Tall grass windless still

  1. dornahainds says:

    Very Nice. A heady little scene with such Awesomeness. 😎

  2. weggieboy says:

    I can see them attempting to eat the seeds while the blades collapse under their weight. What an evocative haiku! I got a shiver reading it.

  3. Yamini says:

    Visually stimulating…very vivid, great writing!!

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