Tall grass windless still
Sparrows trying to perch on
Blades weak unfriendly
Very Nice. A heady little scene with such Awesomeness. 😎
I’m always encouraged by your comments.
As am I humbled by your words of encouragement, AshiAkira. (@–>–)
I can see them attempting to eat the seeds while the blades collapse under their weight. What an evocative haiku! I got a shiver reading it.
Thank you for such a great comment. Nothing is more encouraging me when someone reads my haiku poem and feels something.
Visually stimulating…very vivid, great writing!!
Thank you. 🙂
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