Waiting to be taken
Red persimmons fully ripen
Left between buildings
This is great, like breathing in and out – first line is anticipation, second line expansion with everything big, bold and beautiful, third line a sigh of exhalation in the narrow space space between buildings.
Thank you for the profound comment. You are so generous for the amateur poet. 🙂
Such beautiful radiance.
Such great lines…and oh @ashiakira I have noticed your follow on wattpad
Fast & sharp as a shiburi!
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