Waiting to be taken

Waiting to be taken

Red persimmons fully ripen

Left between buildings


About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems (www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo. 葦享(あしあきら)、著書(1)「伊奈葉くんアメリカを見る」、(2)「伊奈葉さん日本を憂う」(中央公論事業出版)
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5 Responses to Waiting to be taken

  1. This is great, like breathing in and out – first line is anticipation, second line expansion with everything big, bold and beautiful, third line a sigh of exhalation in the narrow space space between buildings.

  2. dornahainds says:

    Such beautiful radiance.

  3. Such great lines…and oh @ashiakira I have noticed your follow on wattpad

  4. Calauche says:

    Fast & sharp as a shiburi!

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