The mountain path pitch dark
No fear no uncertainty
The scent of lily
Always a lighter side to any darkness, I like that in your haikus.
I appreciate your understanding.
The scent of lily in all that darkness- Bodacious feelings, imagery.
Thank you again.
I love this, the sounds of the words, the repetition and the change from harsh in the first line to soft with ‘scent’ and ‘lily’. I am often surprised that my garden is in sync with your surroundings. It is the scent of lilies that reaches for me whenever I walk out of the door at the moment.
Now is the time for that scent, and I wouldn’t miss it for the world. 🙂
Haven’t spoken with you in a while but wanted to drop by and tell you how much I enjoy your haikus–always spot on.
Thank you for taking the time to drop by and make such a kind comment. I am honored.
Oh, yeah, Ashi! The scent of lily 🙂
Thank you. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂 ❤
I sure do ❤
I like this one very much. It reminds me how the fragrance of a rose can just lift up my mind ;o)
Thank you. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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