Narrow mountain path
Bush warblers heard but not seen
The first two lines are so tight and then the image reaches out with the word over and the word hydrangeas as you imagine tone big blooms. Very pleasing.
Thank you. Your comment is always instructive and encouraging.
Thank you for reading my haiku poem.
Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:
You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change )
You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change )
You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change )
You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change )
Connecting to %s
Notify me of new comments via email.
Notify me of new posts via email.