The scent of young leaves

The scent of young leaves

With the chirping of sparrows

As the window opened

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems and Haiku Poems II( Old resident of Tokyo.
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24 Responses to The scent of young leaves

  1. Tanja says:

    I can feel the fresh gentle scent and birdsong rushing into my room and filling it up, despite my window being closed. πŸ™‚ Such a great poem, it evokes the feeling of spring perfectly.

  2. AshiAkira, your words are as summer rain on a window- there for the reader to see and feel.

  3. We had a sunny day today and between trying to get the veg plot in order, I went around the garden sniffing and listening… just as you describe.

  4. I likes chirping of sparrows…

  5. r_prab says:

    Ah! Good Morning! πŸ™‚

  6. mopana says:

    Here is raining and as you said I can feel the scent of young leaves. Wonderful haiku, Grandpa Ashi ❀

  7. Beaton says:

    I heart this one……
    I saw
    fall softly
    to the soft brown earth

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