Sparrows trill, chirp, trill

Sparrows trill, chirp, trill

The right rhythm to wake me up

Soft light through the curtain

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About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems (www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo. 葦享(あしあきら)、著書(1)「伊奈葉くんアメリカを見る」、(2)「伊奈葉さん日本を憂う」(中央公論事業出版)
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17 Responses to Sparrows trill, chirp, trill

  1. mopana says:

    Beautiful way to wake up, Ashi 😀

  2. Such a good sound to wake up to, I agree.

  3. Azul Zaffre says:

    What a nice way to wake up 🙂

    • AshiAkira says:

      Thank you as always for reading my haiku poems. (I found your comments in my “pending” file where I saw them today. I don’t know why. But am sorry that happened as I always appreciate your comments.)

  4. gigoid says:

    Beautiful… just to read it banishes all the many other, not-so-pleasant ways to wake up one might ever have had… trill, chirp, trill… a perfectly natural rhythm. Like any great poem, this one is a refection of, and, distillation of the truth of life.

    ‘Twould be hard to NOT enjoy the rest of the day, to wake up so peacefully.

    gigoid

  5. gigoid says:

    Ashi,

    This is so good, I’d like to share it with my Gentle Readers tomorrow on my blog. You’ll get a pingback here when it’s posted… Thank you, for writing of life, and for sharing your take on living it in peace…

    gigoid

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  7. I love sparrows so your post just touched my heart . Beautiful

  8. A sound so much better than an alarm clock!

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