AshiAkira. Author of "Haiku Poems" and "Haiku Poems II" (www.lulu.com/shop/ashiakira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
Thank you as always for reading my haiku poems. (I found your comments in my “pending” file where I saw them today. I don’t know why. But am sorry that happened as I always appreciate your comments.)
Beautiful… just to read it banishes all the many other, not-so-pleasant ways to wake up one might ever have had… trill, chirp, trill… a perfectly natural rhythm. Like any great poem, this one is a refection of, and, distillation of the truth of life.
‘Twould be hard to NOT enjoy the rest of the day, to wake up so peacefully.
This is so good, I’d like to share it with my Gentle Readers tomorrow on my blog. You’ll get a pingback here when it’s posted… Thank you, for writing of life, and for sharing your take on living it in peace…
Beautiful way to wake up, Ashi 😀
Yes, Monica. 🙂
❤
Such a good sound to wake up to, I agree.
Yes, again this morning. 🙂
What a nice way to wake up 🙂
Thank you as always for reading my haiku poems. (I found your comments in my “pending” file where I saw them today. I don’t know why. But am sorry that happened as I always appreciate your comments.)
Beautiful… just to read it banishes all the many other, not-so-pleasant ways to wake up one might ever have had… trill, chirp, trill… a perfectly natural rhythm. Like any great poem, this one is a refection of, and, distillation of the truth of life.
‘Twould be hard to NOT enjoy the rest of the day, to wake up so peacefully.
gigoid
Thank you for the beautiful comment. I’m much encouraged.
Ashi,
This is so good, I’d like to share it with my Gentle Readers tomorrow on my blog. You’ll get a pingback here when it’s posted… Thank you, for writing of life, and for sharing your take on living it in peace…
gigoid
Thank you. You are so kind.
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Thank you. You are so kind.
I love sparrows so your post just touched my heart . Beautiful
I’m glad. Thank you.
A sound so much better than an alarm clock!
Yes, indeed. 🙂