Sparrows trill, chirp, trill

Sparrows trill, chirp, trill

The right rhythm to wake me up

Soft light through the curtain

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of "Haiku Poems" and "Haiku Poems II" ( Old resident of Tokyo.
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17 Responses to Sparrows trill, chirp, trill

  1. mopana says:

    Beautiful way to wake up, Ashi 😀

  2. Such a good sound to wake up to, I agree.

  3. Azul Zaffre says:

    What a nice way to wake up 🙂

    • AshiAkira says:

      Thank you as always for reading my haiku poems. (I found your comments in my “pending” file where I saw them today. I don’t know why. But am sorry that happened as I always appreciate your comments.)

  4. gigoid says:

    Beautiful… just to read it banishes all the many other, not-so-pleasant ways to wake up one might ever have had… trill, chirp, trill… a perfectly natural rhythm. Like any great poem, this one is a refection of, and, distillation of the truth of life.

    ‘Twould be hard to NOT enjoy the rest of the day, to wake up so peacefully.


  5. gigoid says:


    This is so good, I’d like to share it with my Gentle Readers tomorrow on my blog. You’ll get a pingback here when it’s posted… Thank you, for writing of life, and for sharing your take on living it in peace…


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  7. I love sparrows so your post just touched my heart . Beautiful

  8. A sound so much better than an alarm clock!

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