Outside the window

Outside the window

Sunlight through naked branches

Birds jumping around

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems and Haiku Poems II(www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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7 Responses to Outside the window

  1. Can just visualise this sight! Must be pretty! One day I’ll make it to Tokyo for the cherry blossoms in spring – heard it’s spectacular!

  2. I think it works well with abound instead of around.

  3. AshiAkira says:

    Thank you. I couldn’t think of that world from only a small number of sparrows. I would be beautiful though.

  4. Heartafire says:

    You are in motion today Ashi, lovely visuals in these haikus!

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