On a subway train

On a subway train

A girl offered me her seat

Her smile in the crowd

(More at: https://ashiakira.wordpress.com/story-poems-2/a-girl-on-a-subway-train/)

 

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems and Haiku Poems II(www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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17 Responses to On a subway train

  1. mopana says:

    Very nice 🙂 She was polite. But you… You make Haiku from nothing. You’re a genius AshiAkira 🙂

  2. I like this (and the longer poem), you have captured one of the seismic shifts in our lives. I am getting used to it now, but the first time I was offered a seat, I felt both touched and sad – but also grateful.

    • AshiAkira says:

      “… touched and sad – but also grateful.” That’s exactly how I feel whenever it happens. But this time the girl somehow reminded me of the days when I was her age. The reflection of my face on the subway train window showed me so much change, but I felt no change inside. So much change but no progress…

  3. gigoid says:

    Beautiful, my friend….The act itself, and the haiku you made from the experience, both….

    gigoid

  4. How nice. I hardly coem across such courtesy these days.:-)

  5. Jennifer says:

    Such kindness captured in your poem.

  6. RoSy says:

    How sweet & thoughtful.

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