July but cold rain

July but cold rain

Small ripples scatter in the pond

Lotuses shiver

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of "Haiku Poems" and "Haiku Poems II" (www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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8 Responses to July but cold rain

  1. Ron says:

    Yet another shimmering jewel on lotuses! Very nicely done!


  2. Beautiful images. Here in the UK we live in a strange parallel – after a heat wave, the garden is shivering and I am in vests and jumpers again.

  3. Oh I love the personification–that the lotuses shiver.

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