Pond at the town park

Pond at the town park

Where soldiers massed before battles

Now carp calmly swim


About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems and Haiku Poems II(www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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12 Responses to Pond at the town park

  1. DELL CLOVER says:

    Much better, I’d say.

  2. GP Cox says:

    All the ponds should be so serene.

  3. lgcorey says:

    beautiful. complex.

  4. So much in so few words. I love it.

  5. gigoid says:


    You’re getting really good at this, my friend….


  6. RoSy says:

    If only that’s how it could always be.

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