Rain down in torrent

Rain down in torrent

The pellets beat the tree leaves

Wash off the winter

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About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems (www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo. 葦享(あしあきら)、著書(1)「伊奈葉くんアメリカを見る」、(2)「伊奈葉さん日本を憂う」(中央公論事業出版)
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11 Responses to Rain down in torrent

  1. Lerene Forte says:

    Oooh, I especially like the last line–wraps it up well!

  2. Rain is spring. Snow is winter. Therefore, rain is good!

  3. Wonderful. Over here too the trains have started in earnest.

  4. RoSy says:

    Yes – wash off the winter! 😉

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