Walking in sleeting

Walking in sleeting

She raised her rain hood and smiled

Made spring come closer

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems and Haiku Poems II(www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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6 Responses to Walking in sleeting

  1. gigoid says:

    Great image created by that second line, perfectly highlighted by the third. Well done…

    gigoid

  2. This is a charmer of a poem, especially as I am staring out of the window at icy sleet.

  3. RoSy says:

    And – I smiled too. 😀

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