Party with old friends
Sweet memories back again
This one is special
I love this one! Wonderful!
You’re welcome! 🙂
Best way to add the character lines. 🙂
Yes, laugh lines are well earned 🙂
Very nice! I really like the last line.
I’m glad you liked it. Thank you.
Reblogged this on Crystal's write life and commented:
Beautiful AshiAkira how you can evoke so much with your Haiku astonishing you are talented. Thanks for bringing to mind sweet memories.
Thank you for reading and reblogging one of my haiku poems. My definition of a haiku is the shortest possible form of a poem into which things are squeezed so that things can be conveyed to busy readers in the shortest and least time and effort possible. I still have a far way to go to writing a good one though.
I do not agree with your statement that you have not written a good. I have read your Haiku’s and they are beautiful and say so much in three lines. I am impressed. When I was eleven a man from Japan a Calligraphist came to vista our class and taught us about the Haiku and we wrote our own. It is not easy to match the syllables into English as we all did it is not easy what your are doing and I praise your individual take on writing. Keep up the great work. 🙂
Made me smile. 😀
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