Stream dug through the park

Stream dug through the park

Kids not allowed to step in

For what was it made?


About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems ( Old resident of Tokyo. 葦享(あしあきら)、著書(1)「伊奈葉くんアメリカを見る」、(2)「伊奈葉さん日本を憂う」(中央公論事業出版)
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9 Responses to Stream dug through the park

  1. I guess it was made for grumpy adults who’ve forgotten that they were ever children!

  2. Some of my happiest childhood hours were spent with my brothers creating mini-dams in the mountain streams in a forest in Germany.

  3. lkwatts67 says:

    I like the metaphoric double entendre in this one; very evocative!

  4. kalabalu says:

    Spoiled the park ..too bad for kids
    No more more kicks

  5. Like my aunts when bought a new couch – you weren’t allowed to sit on it. Huh?

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