Floating down a stream
A boat made of bamboo leaf
Carrying childhood dream
nice one ….floating down…..a stream boat made of bamboo leaf……carrying childhood dreams …hmmmm yumy
Thank you for such a king comment. I feel honored.
“Carrying childhood dream”
At 65 I am still carrying some.
A delightful image! I am like Carl D’Agostino – I still can bring up some of the simple joys of childhood, and this haiku evokes one of my favorite ones: setting a leaf in moving water to see where it ends up!
Thank you. To me it was a huge liner steaming across the Pacific.
What a lovely image!
I love them all. Some are special — memories of childhood, though the materials were different
Another good one, with the jump from the physical image to the mental one. i like the small scale imagery, bamboo leaf, childhood dream, yet the consequence is so big.
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