Floating down a stream

Floating down a stream

A boat made of bamboo leaf

Carrying childhood dream

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of "Haiku Poems" and "Haiku Poems II" (www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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9 Responses to Floating down a stream

  1. HARI DAS says:

    nice one ….floating down…..a stream boat made of bamboo leaf……carrying childhood dreams …hmmmm yumy

  2. “Carrying childhood dream”

    At 65 I am still carrying some.

  3. weggieboy says:

    A delightful image! I am like Carl D’Agostino – I still can bring up some of the simple joys of childhood, and this haiku evokes one of my favorite ones: setting a leaf in moving water to see where it ends up!

  4. I love them all. Some are special — memories of childhood, though the materials were different

  5. Another good one, with the jump from the physical image to the mental one. i like the small scale imagery, bamboo leaf, childhood dream, yet the consequence is so big.

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