Sparrows flew away

Sparrows flew away

Sorry I opened the window

Cold morning outside

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems and Haiku Poems II(www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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3 Responses to Sparrows flew away

  1. Are you trying to convey something in these short lines? I mean i really like your poems its simple yet little difficult to understand…

    • AshiAkira says:

      Thank you for such a good and important question. I don’t really know, however, how to answer it. I recall a similar question was once put to an Indian mystic philosopher, and he answered it by a question, “What is the meaning of the roses?” About the haiku poem you asked me about here, I might say I simply felt sorry for suddenly opening the window which may have disturbed the sparrows whatever they were doing then. And I got the cold winter wind in return. That’s all there is to it. I hope you visualize something.

      • Hey thanks a lot for your reply…I am just new to this little world…I don’t have more knoweledge about haikus but now i think by reading yours i will learn a bit more about it…Yup i visualised it & also understood it…Keep writing…:)

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