AshiAkira. Author of "Haiku Poems" and "Haiku Poems II" (www.lulu.com/shop/ashiakira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
sir i just came across something similar like this yesterday on the internet.
After some showers,
Beautiful blue sky reflected,
In the puddles.
Is there any similarity or just i felt that way?
Anyway as i said your way of writing of haiku is in the typical haiku japanese poetry.Keep writing.God Bless 🙂
Elegant image. 🙂
Thank you. Very glad you think go.
I agree with Gallivanta, very elegant.
sir i just came across something similar like this yesterday on the internet.
After some showers,
Beautiful blue sky reflected,
In the puddles.
Is there any similarity or just i felt that way?
Anyway as i said your way of writing of haiku is in the typical haiku japanese poetry.Keep writing.God Bless 🙂
I can only say you rightly felt in your way. I really appreciate your reading my haiku poems.
Tomorrow morning, my friend, when I sit in my balcony and drink my tea while looking at the morning sky, I shall remember this again
Such a nice thing to say! I am grateful.
Beautiful haiku – thank you
I’m glad you think so.
Lovely.
Thank you.
I can just smell that tea… lovely. Wish we could share a cup!
I do too. 🙂
This is lovely – all the senses fulfilled.
Thank you for the reflections and fragrance you give to all of us.
I thank you as always for so kindly reading my haiku poems. Deeply appreciated.
Soothing…