Trees still and quiet

Trees still and quiet

Warmth of sunlight faintly felt

Soon to be snowing

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of "Haiku Poems" and "Haiku Poems II" (www.lulu.com/shop/ashiakira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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12 Responses to Trees still and quiet

  1. I like them all, as you know…

  2. Again a lovely build-up this time from warmth to cold.

  3. carolahand says:

    I love the way your poetry brings me inside the quiet and warmth, savoring the last moments before winter arrives…

  4. gigoid says:

    Good job, dude… summer to winter in two lines…

    🙂

  5. sherinsk says:

    Beautiful 🙂

  6. I Love this poem, growing up in Connecticut the changing of the leaves was brilliant, they seemed to shout out with their colors but once the leaves all dropped to the ground the concert was over and stillness remained.
    You may enjoy my husband site where you can add your poems to the “living haiku anthology” http://www.underthebasho.com
    Thanks for sharing your poetry,
    Maria

    • AshiAkira says:

      Thank you for reading my haiku poem. I feel honored if you liked it. And thank you also for letting me know of the “living haiku anthology” on your husband’s site.

  7. RoSy says:

    We already saw a glimpse of snow on the 25th. Brrr…

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