Moat surface disturbed

Moat surface disturbed

A typhoon is approaching

Leaves rolling faster

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems and Haiku Poems II(www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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5 Responses to Moat surface disturbed

  1. weggieboy says:

    Keenly observed! It is a treat to come to your postings because of the way your stir the imagination with your haiku.

  2. Rajiv says:

    Super imagery. Evocative

  3. gpcox says:

    Only 10 words and whole scene is portrayed.

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