Long hair on her back

Long hair on her back

Sways as she walks a puppy

Autumn air fragrant

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems and Haiku Poems II(www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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4 Responses to Long hair on her back

  1. This reminded me instantly of some other beautiful lines by T S Eliot: ‘Blown hair is sweet, Brown hair over the mouth blown, Lilac and brown hair…” from Ash Wednesday.

  2. I love them all, and some of them evoke even more powerful visions and other senses — like this one.

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