Small white narcissi

Small white narcissi

Vanished from the sidewalk bed

The scent remembered

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems and Haiku Poems II(www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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8 Responses to Small white narcissi

  1. I love the suggestion of scent remaining once the flower is gone. Lovely.

  2. gpcox says:

    This brought back memories of the evening jasmine that used to be outside my bedroom.

  3. I have a thing about narcissi and their scent. Just at the moment our garden is crazy with scents.

  4. Just to let you know: I envy writers like you who can turn everything beautiful in this world into wonderful verses and haikus. I studied it in high school though I never got to pursue the particular art. Maybe I should start; one of these days. 🙂

    Warm Regards
    Lady from Manila

    • AshiAkira says:

      Thank you. Your comment encouraged me tremendously. I hope you start it right now. Now is the only time when you can start anything. Please don’t be a procrastinater who won’t start doing anything while there still is time.

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