Yellow, pink and white

Yellow, pink and white

Small chrysanthemums in bloom

Planted by students

About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems and Haiku Poems II(www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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4 Responses to Yellow, pink and white

  1. panikikubik says:

    A beautiful haiku. I From vizualising flowers on a field (in the beginning of the haiku), I end up visualizing a student in a apartment in a city (maybe shared with others) and the haiku shares his/hers vision of growth, hope, loneliness and plans for the future.

  2. I love the conclusion, I’m not even sure why – perhaps for the reasons listed above.

  3. Aliosa says:

    Good morning !

    Aliosa.

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