Lay still in quiet

Lay still in quiet

Saw a land of misty glow

 Here and far away

(Continued: https://ashiakira.wordpress.com/story-poems-2/asthma-attack/)

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About AshiAkira

AshiAkira. Author of Haiku Poems and Haiku Poems II(www.lulu.com/shop/ashi-akira/haiku-poems/paperback/product-23152158.html). Old resident of Tokyo.
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6 Responses to Lay still in quiet

  1. Carmel Grimley says:

    “Here and far away” in both space and time are perhaps illusion. A false duality that we live here on our globe that orbits inn a universe of pure consciousness – perhaps :))) Perhaps when “here” and “far away” blend we will no longer be “here”.

  2. Blessings for 2013, good health and many haiku…Ellen

  3. Susan Bahr says:

    I’m so glad to see you back, Ashi! I was getting concerned there when I didn’t see any new haikus. Lovely this one- so touching.

  4. janehewey says:

    utterly complete, this haiku says much about stillness and change. beautiful.

  5. pennycoho says:

    Yes, serenely lovely and pure!

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